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Post by Gryffin on Jun 4, 2009 17:41:03 GMT -5
Well, I'm planning to continue this Fic from H&L, although first I need to sum up of what I wrote back then.
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Post by PinkyDoll on Jun 4, 2009 18:22:43 GMT -5
Yeah you should continue it~
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Post by Patamonrox on Jun 4, 2009 20:09:34 GMT -5
certainly! You should continue my friend^_^
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Post by Gryffin on Jun 5, 2009 0:07:02 GMT -5
Chapter 4 - Shinji and Rika
Benimaru was sleeping in the room he shared with Kotoko and Izumi at the inn.
"for someone who complains alot, he sure seems to sleep soundly enough,"Izumi muttered.
"are you talking about Beni? well yes he does look cute sleeping,"Kotoko added.
Benimaru stirred, and saw the two girls staring at him.
"Woi! You two shouldn't be staring at people when they're sleeping! go back to bed!"he shouted.
Izumi and Kotoko giggled, and both of them went to their respective beds.
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Next morning, Benimaru and the rest grouped outside the inn.
"Right, today me and Kirei are going to get information on where we are, for now Benimaru, you and the girls can run off and look around, but try not to get into trouble,"Kagemaru said, and went off with Kirei.
Not long after Benimaru and the girls looked around the town, they saw this young boy, with green hair, looking around for someone.Kotoko ran up to him.
"Is there something wrong?"she asked him, the boy turned to her and nodded.
"Well, um, I am looking for really rare creature called the Godaichuu,"the boy replied.
"and what seems to be the problem?"Kotoko asked again.
"I seem to have lost my guardian, Rika...,"he said.
"Well, why wait for her, when you can go searching for it with the three of us?!"Benimaru suggested, curious about the animal.
"Beni!"Izumi scolded.
"Well... it may seem to be a good idea, if you're sure about it that is,"the boy said.
"A hundred percent!"Benimaru said loudly.
The boy smiled.
"Thank you, you are saving me a great deal of time,"he said."Oh, and my name is Shinji,"
"I am Benimaru, son of th-,"Benimaru boasted, but got his mouth covered by Kotoko.
"We don't know who might be out here, so you shouldn't be boasting about your heritage,"she said.
Izumi sighed.
"My name is Izumi, and this is Kotoko,"she said.
"Nice to meet you, Benimaru-san, Izumi-chan, and Kotoko-chan,"Shinji said, bowing.
"Well, we should hurry up, I can't wait to see this 'Godaichuu'!"Benimaru said.
"From what I've heard, the Godaichuu is a majestic creature, able to control the five elements, so we had better be careful,"Shinji said.
The four of them soon set off for the forest.
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"We've been searching for hours, and yet no sign of this 'majestic creature'!"Benimaru whined.
"I'm sorry we haven't been able to find it sooner, bu-,"Shinji started, but was interrupted.
"So CUUUUUUUUUUUTEEE!!!!!"Izumi cried pointing at a small bunny-like creature on a branch.
"Nyuu nyuu~!"it squeaked, staring at the rest.
Shinji walked up to it, and started talking to it, until suddenly, a large branch above him broke and started falling.
Izumi screamed.
"Heads up!"Benimaru shouted, drawing his sword, and cut the branch neatly in half.
"Thanks,"Shinji said, shaken at the fact he would've been squashed flat if it wasn't for him.
"No problem, but I think we should be heading back now, sorry about not being able to find the 'godaichuu',"Benimaru said.
"Correction, the 'godaichuu' is right here,"Shinji said referring to the small creature.
The godaichuu smiled, and started hovering around Benimaru's head.
"Thank you for saving me, Masta~,"it said in its high-pitched voice.
"Wha~?! are you saying this little annoying 'thing' is the majestic creature you were referring too?!"Benimaru exclaimed, surprised beyond all reason.
"Well, he seems more cute than majestic, but yes, he is the 'godaichuu',"Shinji said.
"We had better head back,"Kotoko suggested."Kagemaru may get worried,"
Izumi nodded in agreement.
As the group were heading back to the city, the godaichuu followed Benimaru.
"Will you stop following me, you... you... 'thing'!"Benimaru yelled.
"But, you saved me, Nyuu, and now I dedicate my whole life to you~,"the creature said.
Benimaru groaned.
"How I wish I saved him instead...,"Izumi said to herself.
"We should name it Nyuu, because of the sound it makes,"Kotoko suggested, smiling.
Izumi and Shinji nodded.
"That's a great name~! Nyuu,"Nyuu said.
"But whatever it is, you better prove yourself useful, 'thing'!"Benimaru said.
"Yoush!"
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Post by Nymphmon on Jun 5, 2009 0:43:47 GMT -5
interesating
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Post by PinkyDoll on Jun 5, 2009 8:19:53 GMT -5
Aww Nyuu sounds cute :3 You gotta capitalize when you start a sentence mister xP Other then that I liked this chap~
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Post by Gryffin on Jun 5, 2009 8:30:04 GMT -5
It's a common mistake for me Next chap should be up soon
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Post by Nymphmon on Jun 5, 2009 9:18:48 GMT -5
yaY ^^
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Post by Hayabusa on Jun 5, 2009 11:01:17 GMT -5
cute chapter
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Post by Gryffin on Jun 5, 2009 11:08:20 GMT -5
Nyuu~ Arigato! Nyuu~
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Post by Hayabusa on Jun 5, 2009 11:16:21 GMT -5
your welcome Nyuu darn it now im saying it
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Post by Nymphmon on Jun 5, 2009 13:08:05 GMT -5
lolness ^^
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Post by Gryffin on Jun 7, 2009 10:56:00 GMT -5
Chapter 5 - Captured
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"Finally, back to the town!"Benimaru exclaimed, tired from all the walking.
Kagemaru walked up to them.
"Guys, I have some good news and bad news,"he said.
"What is it?"Shinji asked curiously.
"Good news is, we're going on a trip,"Kagemaru said.
"And the bad news?"Benimaru asked.
"We've been caught by military forces....,"he answered in a grim tone.
Several uniformed soldiers surrounded the group, and bound their hands.They were soon lead to a large ship, and sent into cells below the deck.There, they met Kirei, and a small blue haired girl.
"Shinji-kun! I'm glad you're safe!!!"She said, hugging Shinji.
"Mmm, this is Rika, Shinji's... guardian,"Kagemaru said.
"WHA-?!"Benimaru, Izumi and Kotoko looked at Rika in disbelief.How can such a young girl possibly be his guardian?
"Nyuu~"Nyuu said, confused with the situation.
"Shut up! I've gotten tired of those 'Neew Neew' noises you make!!!"Benimaru shouted, and Nyuu slowly looked down.
Rika looked at Benimaru.
"So who is this handsome (and rich looking) hunk?"she asked in a seductive manner, standing close to him.
Benimaru stepped away from Rika, and faked a smile.
"Well, enough of this joking, we need to get out of here,"Kirei finally said.
"But how?"Kotoko asked.
"Leave that to me...,"Kagemaru answered, and walked towards the cell bars.He muttered a few words, and the cell bars fell on the floor.The group then exited the cell and went up onto the deck.
"Halt!"A guard shouted, running at them, holding his sword above his head.With a single strike, Kagemaru impaled the guard upon his sword.Benimaru stared, eyes wide with fear and disgust.He turned to Kagemaru.
"K-Kagemaru-san! Y-you didn't have to kill him!!!"Benimaru yelled.
"I admire your sympathy for him, but its either kill, or be killed right now,"Kagemaru replied."Now come,"
Kagemaru led the rest of the group to the bridge.As they entered, several guards were staring at them, ready to draw their weapons.One of them however, had a more fine and unique uniform, and was obviously the captain of the ship.
"Oh my, my mistake, we shouldn't have come here...,"Kagemaru said.
Rika looked angrily at him.
"Now we're all going to die!"She whined.
Suddenly, a man entered into the room, and jumped right behind the captain.
"What the-?!"The captain exclaimed right as he was stabbed in the arm with a needle, and fell onto the ground.
Benimaru looked at the newcomer.He had green hair, green eyes, and a somewhat familiar face.He smiled as he recognized him.
"Danemon!"he shouted and waved.
Danemon smiled back, then looked at the guards.
"If you wish for your captain's safety, exit the ship now!"he ordered.
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As soon as all the soldiers and guards were out of the ship, Kagemaru pulled up the stairs.Benimaru ran to Danemon.
"Danemon, you came for us!"He said.
"Well, Ina would be upset if you were gone, so I set out to find you,"Danemon replied smiling.
"How'd you find us?"Benimaru asked.
"Well, there was a rumour about some prisoners above a ship, I thought it could be you,"Danemon said.
Benimaru smiled.
"Now we'll be back home in no time!"he said.
"Nyuu~!"Nyuu added.
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Post by Nymphmon on Jun 7, 2009 11:31:41 GMT -5
good ^^
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Post by Hayabusa on Jun 7, 2009 14:37:40 GMT -5
awesome.
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